I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Today we did a game it was called who am I.We got 20 points at the end of the lesin they pick points we get 20.The class that has the most points get a partey.
Hey Kyle it's Azire from Gilberthope. school and this is very cool so was the party How much looses did you get?. Did you think about adding more Information. bye
Kia ora, Milla here from gilberthorpe school.Wow you nocked my socks off ! Your very new to are class i can't believe that you are already posting !Did you think about looking at your writing and going back and looking at it? Still well done for posting already.Next time you could look back at your writing. Good day from Milla 😀
Hi Kyle its Dani love your work about kiwi can. Next time add more detail say who was hosting all of the kiwi can but awesome job I hope this is useful bye.
Hi Kyle, my name is Janel from Hornby High School. I liked the way that you explained the things that happened in that lesson really well. Maybe next time you could reread your work and make sure that every must be in the right place. I hope this bog comment helps you! BYE!
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Today we did a game it was called who am I.We got 20 points at the end of the lesin they pick points we get 20.The class that has the most points get a partey.
Hey Kyle it's Azire from Gilberthope. school and this is very cool so was the party How much looses did you get?. Did you think about adding more Information. bye
ReplyDeleteKia ora, Milla here from gilberthorpe school.Wow you nocked my socks off ! Your very new to are class i can't believe that you are already posting !Did you think about looking at your writing and going back and looking at it? Still well done for posting already.Next time you could look back at your writing. Good day from Milla 😀
ReplyDeleteHi Kyle its Dani love your work about kiwi can. Next time add more detail say who was hosting all of the kiwi can but awesome job I hope this is useful bye.
ReplyDeleteHi Kyle, my name is Janel from Hornby High School. I liked the way that you explained the things that happened in that lesson really well. Maybe next time you could reread your work and make sure that every must be in the right place. I hope this bog comment helps you! BYE!
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