I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora Kyle my name is TJ from Hornby High School. I love that you made a DLO because it stands out a lot because your talking about your goals and that you try your best to do yours goals.
Maybe next time try add some more goals that you haven't tried yet, And when you said to do more chores to get money, Don't forget to put a full stop at the end of the sentence. Another thing what I like is your trying to get into a football club.
What is something else that your gonna try for your next goal. Have a beautiful day bye now.
hi my name is Taifou i like how you like soccer.i play soccer for wigram primary school.i like how you put your picture on your blog.i even like your background color
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Kia ora Kyle my name is TJ from Hornby High School. I love that you made a DLO because it stands out a lot because your talking about your goals and that you try your best to do yours goals.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time try add some more goals that you haven't tried yet, And when you said to do more chores to get money, Don't forget to put a full stop at the end of the sentence. Another thing what I like is your trying to get into a football club.
What is something else that your gonna try for your next goal. Have a beautiful day bye now.
hi my name is Taifou i like how you like soccer.i play soccer for wigram primary school.i like how you put your picture on your blog.i even like your background color
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