I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Kyle, Miss Johnstone here. Great blog post! Contributing is such an important skill we all need to learn. It goes so well with our school values 'be there' and 'choose your attitude'. You have put some great ideas in here about how to contribute at home, at school and in the community. Did this task take you long? Maybe it is something I should try with Ngakaunui.
Kia ora Kyle. I can see that you contribute in lots of different ways at home and at school. How do you think you are going with the contributing at school, especially with keeping our school environment clean and tidy?
Hi Kyle, I liked that you put lots of ideas and you have very good ideas. I liked that the background doesn't make the text hard to read. I liked the picking up rubbish one. Next time you could make the introduction longer and put why you did the contributing work.
Kia ora Kyle, You have done a good job on this, you can contribute a lot. Why did you do this?, would you want to do this again?, next time you could add more writing, information and description about this, because I don't know why you did this, that's all from me, blog you later.
Kia Ora Kyle, Kirsty here! This is a average blog post because it just needs a little bit of work. Maybe next time you could do a " quality " blog post like your blog post before this one. I really like your ideas and do you think next time you will do more work to make a better post?Blog ya later.
Kia Ora Kyle. I like your blog post about contribute. Contribute is a good thing to learn about. Maybe next time you could add a longer info part at the top?
kia ora kyle I enjoyed the part when you said wen you said what you are going to do Did you think about the color you can't really see the words Why did you do this bye
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Hi Kyle, Miss Johnstone here. Great blog post! Contributing is such an important skill we all need to learn. It goes so well with our school values 'be there' and 'choose your attitude'. You have put some great ideas in here about how to contribute at home, at school and in the community. Did this task take you long? Maybe it is something I should try with Ngakaunui.
ReplyDeletehi kyle it is micah stuff you post it is really good stuff for real i do like it ok bye
ReplyDeleteKia ora Kyle.
ReplyDeleteI can see that you contribute in lots of different ways at home and at school. How do you think you are going with the contributing at school, especially with keeping our school environment clean and tidy?
hi that is very cool
ReplyDeleteHi Kyle,
ReplyDeleteI liked that you put lots of ideas and you have very good ideas. I liked that the background doesn't make the text hard to read. I liked the picking up rubbish one. Next time you could make the introduction longer and put why you did the contributing work.
Kia Ora Kyle,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great blog post! Next time you could set the blog post out using the Blog Rubric. But great ideas for contributing!
Hi Kian here I like the way you explained how to contribute to things.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you you could explain what your next step is bye.
Kia ora Kyle
ReplyDeleteIts looks cool and you can do It
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Kia ora Kyle,
ReplyDeleteYou have done a good job on this, you can contribute a lot. Why did you do this?, would you want to do this again?, next time you could add more writing, information and description about this, because I don't know why you did this, that's all from me, blog you later.
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Kyle, Kirsty here! This is a average blog post because it just needs a little bit of work. Maybe next time you could do a " quality " blog post like your blog post before this one. I really like your ideas and do you think next time you will do more work to make a better post?Blog ya later.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Kyle.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about contribute. Contribute is a good thing to learn about.
Maybe next time you could add a longer info part at the top?
Blog you later.
kia ora kyle
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the part when you said wen you said what you are going to do
Did you think about the color you can't really see the words
Why did you do this
bye