3 March 2020 Hurumanu3
Simple to complex sentences
We have publish this because
We are practising for a test that is coming
up soon.So today we have write a boring sentience
like The dog ate,And evolved it in something like
The dog ate sadly this morning on the white lino
shivering.
The dog ate.
The dog ate sadly.
The dog ate sadly this morning.
The dog ate sadly this morning on the white lino.
The dog ate sadly this morning on the white lino
shivering.
Awesome, thank you for sharing your sentences Kyle. I enjoyed seeing how they went from a simple, boring sentence to a more descriptive complex sentence.
ReplyDeleteI also enjoyed how much detail went into your blog introduction. It would be more effective if written as a paragraph, not just sentences starting a new line like our exercise was. Also, don't forget those full stops!
- Miss Birtch